I am so excited about our unit on procedural text! I was amazed by your noticings when we dove into published pieces.
Here is my first draft. After looking at our noticings what could I do to make it better?
How to do an inside whip in roller derby.
I am going to teach you how to do an inside whip in roller derby.
Always wear a helmet, knee pads, elbow pads, and wrist guards.
Avoid other skaters, do not run into them! It can be very dangerous!
What are you going to write your procedural text piece about?